by switchhitter420
Hitting someone on a sawhorse in the head to cause the sawhorse to tip over would cause a shattered jaw, broken teeth, a concussion or worse upon the head hitting the floor, and a trip to the emergency room, with a police escort of him to the police station afterwards! Could not read after that first line!
Ah, the fantasy of extreme and total debasement. Usually, I end up with maternal concern for the character becoming a J Doe, dead in a ditch. Here you have presented the first character I actively wish would end up there.
Ignore Nonny's comments, I enjoyed your story as fiction, not fact (which I hope it was). I could place myself in Lydia's position and enjoyed that fantasy. I am perfectly aware that I wouldn't want it in true life, whatever my libido thinks. I have had similar comments about my own fiction. Ignore them, fantasy is fun.
Even in a compete fantasy like this, it's not okay to imply that using a safeword should constitute a punishment. Young wanna-be doms could very well read this and come to the conclusion that this is acceptable. A disclaimer somewhere before or after the story condemning that would go a long way.
This was so fucking hot and horny. I just cummed 3 times while reading this story. She is really lucky.