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Neither Pam nor I have been visited again by messengers or angels. It seems that Lydia is now at peace.
The End.
Please vote and leave comments. I hope you enjoyed this expanded story.
- COMMENTS
tantaliseabout 7 years agobrilliant story , fascinating details , not too . much sex .It certainly gets my vote as one of the very best.
thruholewizardalmost 9 years agoI enjoyed both stories .the first one had too much raw sex ,and the second one not enough . I was surprised the cabin was not a larger part in Tom and Pam's lives ,it was after all where they met and all . I thought Pam being unfaithful was unnecessary. hey what do I know .Was glad Janie found someone who could overlook her past . I would have liked to hear from Lydia one more time . Thanks for a good time ...twice .
Stephen J
Anonymousover 9 years agoThis was a great rewrite!!
Yes, Pan fell - hard!
But was quick to repent. And experienced god's quick grace and mercy!
We have all fallen. Will we admit to god our sins and ask God's forgiveness as Pam did?
I wish this one could continue.
The sisters and their husbands are great subjects for more stories.
Anonymousover 9 years agoThis has been a very enjoyable read. The only downer being Pam's fall from grace. But quick repentance was followed by quick redemption. Over all - very good!
bruce22over 9 years agoAll changes were positive. The characters were interesting and the settings wonderful.
My only complaint is that I was left without a recipe for solving that addiction problem. There is another one, why stay on as a bank teller. They surely do not need the money and she has plenty to do with twins supplemented by charity work.
