All Comments on 'Lying Young Ch. 02'

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stroudle about 5 years ago

Perfect ending to a great two parter.

Wow you put us through the emotional wringer with this one Smokey, but I loved how it turned out. Its a sign of a good story when you care what happens to the characters. I felt Dori's pain and anguish with her. The intimate scene was sexy and hot and felt real too. Brilliant story of how a life altering event can make you see what really matters in life. Love and close one's round you.

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