All Comments on 'Lyla Ch. 03: Digs Deep'

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jenorma2012 over 6 years ago

not bad

not sure I read the other 2 parts, but I am sure I did, this one was pretty good as well

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Good story

I went back and read the first 2 parts. Glad I did so I knew what was going on. This pert got rushed in the end. They were headed to the shower. Then the next paragraph they are catching a cab. But overall I enjoyed it. Waiting for next part.

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

"seen"

I'm really enjoying this, love the plot and the story is developing nicely.

I apologize for being critical but your misuse of the word "seen" is detracting from your writing. "Seen” should only used with “have,” “has,” or “had.”

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