All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 34'

Just wanted to tell you that you have a gift and I enjoy this book very much. My only complain is the over use of words. We already know that her and her parents are estranged we know the reason why please stop mentioning it. Also at times it seems as if lief is treating her a like a child with special needs. You have done an great job of letting Lynne loose and become the sex vixen we knew she can be. Please stop over using words like she is so sweet, she is so beautiful etc and having them talk as if they not intelligent. Again I love your story and I will keep reading...