All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 38'

by mich80new

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
u have grown

ur writing is far more enriched from the early chapters of this story. I await the next chapter

REED13REED13about 10 years ago
MORE!!

OMG, HER FATHER IS A COMPLETE DOUCHE!!! HOW COULD HE TOTALLY DISREGARD WHAT SHE SAID AS IF SHE SAID NOTHING AT ALL?! HER MOTHER(UGH!) HER PARENTS HAVE NO IDEA WHAT GOD OR JESUS IS ABOUT AND IT'S SAD THAT LYNNE HAD TO BE TORTURED BY THEM EMOTIONALLY, PHYSICALLY, AND SPIRITUALLY AS A CHILD. I AM SOOOO GLAD LEIF IS IN HER LIFE ALONG WITH HIS FAMILY! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
?

Y dere's 2 section of ur submissions? 2 39 ch's? Y?

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