All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 40'

Great job! Looking forward to the honeymoon.

really great chapter!!

Dull dull dull repetitious unrealistic then suddenly unbearably gross then back again to dull dull dull.

Not only is the dialogue between the characters unrealistic and creepy but Leif's character is becoming quite bothersome. Its almost as if he's brainwashing Lynn into doing crazy sexual things for him at the drop of a hat because thats "what sweet little wifeys do for their husbands." Im just having a really hard time getting past these weird misogynistic undertones and Lynne's complete lack of personality and passive childish behavior. I have a really hard time believing that she went to Yale at many points in this story. I know that you're trying to convey this story as a loving consensual relationship but its not coming off that way. I was really hooked in the first few chapters and I intend to stick it out until the end but I find myself skimming through 30% of the story. I don't want this to come off to harsh at all because I really do like these characters but i'd like to see a change in dynamics and maybe a bit more realism.

But you can make it up with Lynn fucking Leif, strap-on! Continue please

Ignore the idiots!! I wanna read more!! Moar!

This is sweet and hot! Continue! Lynn and Leif 4eva!

Moar! OMG this is hottt!