All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 41'

I love this story so much better when the focus isn't on their neverending thoughts of sex and their constant acts of sex.

All good things come to an end.

WRITE ONE.

Thank u!

I been looking for this next chapter for days and days I LOVE IT!! I hope you keep going til they have babies, DONT LISTEN TO THE HATERS don't end it so fast just yet. But I wanna see them have babies and lil Leifs and Lynnes running around KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!

Don' end it yet, more passion, fuck the rest. keep it goin'

I'm the harsh critic from your last post and let me just say that this chapter is the best you've written since the earlier chapters. The stylistic shift in this chapter sooooooooo much more enjoyable! I can't wait to see the next post! Keep up the good work!

omfg! fuckin hot! Moar!

Don't leave us hanging, continue! Please!

Please don't not finish now.

I have been rocking with this story from the beginning and I have loved every second of it. Please continue as you have written a lovely story :)