All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 45'

I've thought for dozens of chapters that the prose is ridiculously flowery, but I've accepted that as your writing style.

For some reason though, this chapter had an abundance of them crying words. It's ok to write that they "said" something as opposed to that they "cried" something.

Even though I've had plenty of issues with your writing style, I am so excited to see where this goes and I'm really enjoying this story! I'm hoping to get a little insight to their lives after the honeymoon if you don't continue the story past that point. I can't wait for your next update.

On your previous chapters, I was kinda mad at Lynne for being childish, this time at Leif, why do he keep bringing up the past? Poor Lynney, bad Leify! Great writing, they're such an adorable couple, so cute!

Love this. Please write more soon.

I've been rocking with this story from the start and I have such a bittersweet feeling about it coming to an end. I love Lynn and Leif and their tenderness towards each other makes my heart melt. On the other hand, your tension building is beyond excellent and I am soooo ready for them to fuck! Hurry up! lol