All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 52'

To be honest this is not good writing. It's tedious and repetitious.

Great update can't wait for the next installment

You aren't a bad writer but you repeat yourself as you write SO frequently. You had to have typed "romantic dance" at least 5 times when 1) dance would suffice after one time OR 2)you call it a slow dance like most people would.

You should focus on brevity

Tell us again about the seashells in his hair. Oh, use the word cute some more. I haven’t read that enough in the last fifty two chapters.