All Comments on 'Lynne Takes Revenge'

Piece of fetish (garbage) that is stinking up Loving Wives category.

The author did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some serious gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this bad story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context and it isn't even hot nor sexy story. This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

What a bunch of crap! If thats your lifestyle then be lucky but dont annoy the normal reader at this site!!!

Until I got to the "I'm enslaved by my wife and her lover" line. Couldn't get past that.

Do we really need another UK cuck wimp writer???? This was pathetic sissy boy wimp shit at its worst.... 1******

definitely fetish...

Always the optimist I used to waste my time reading the story hoping the worm will turn. But too much disappointment so now I just read the last couple paragraphs to see if the protagonist grows a pair in the end. JUST more cuck wimp shit till the end. If it's your thing so be it but to me nothing beats hubby haveing or growing a pair and in the end delivering a can of wupass.

Another story to really piss off the B.T.B group that come here every day to moan and groan about cuck stories...

I think die would be the best bet for the character in your story. Your best bet author, and I use that term very loosely, is to quit writing... or at least quit posting.

story written by a person who is dead and just doesn't know it yet.

Give it up. Fetish stories don't belong in loving wives. Why can't you seem to understand that. Too dense or nothing between your ears, but wax?

absurd cuck shit.

He could fucking leave the bitch... any normal guy would...

Gave up after first paragraph, went to the end and gave it one star.

What can I do? Simple. Kill the whore, then the lover boy and finally kill himself. And made the corpses delivered to the house of the person who wrote this shitty story.

Hate authors who waste my time reading things I don't want to.

I'll make you a deal -- I won't waste your time telling you not to write stuff like this if you will stop wasting my time reading something that is wrongly categorized.

You are sick!

...in the end, though. I can't help that he deserves every humiliation she heaps on him. He clearly gets off on her overt sexuality and blatant infidelity.

Apparently it runs in their social circles, as well.

Gee, couldn't she find, date and marry a real man? Guess not, neither were several of her friends able to find men worthy of the title.

Best call them "wee willie winky" and keep them dressed as little whores.

Sorry, content was a bust for me.

I gave it a fair trial, but won't be back. Besides, this belongs in transv/cross dressers, not here.

No. Thank. You.

The author is gay and so it should be his trash stories.

fag cuck shit.

What a bunch of crap, MINUS 5*!!!

When she started to lay down the law he laughed in her face and went out to a sports bar to have a beer. When he got back he explained that he made the money and she had 24 hours to pack her things and get out. He'd file for a divorce the next day. What husband stays with a bitch that wants to demean, degrade and humiliate him? I wonder how many diseases she has? No sane man touches her with a ten foot pole. Is he totally lacking in pride and self respect? I don't think so. He filed for a divorce. exposed her affairs to everyone they knew and left her with her maiden name and her clothes. This was complete drivel. Just awful.

1 star

Once released take the pictures away from her. What's she going to do? Beat you up? Call the police. The charges range from illegal restraint, assault, battery and spousal abuse to possible kidnapping and blackmail charges. In any case she's either going to jail or the divorce will leave her with her clothes, her car, her maiden name and a horrible reputation. This was unfinished drivel.

1 star