All Comments on 'Lynn's Story'

Dreams could turn into reality. Great story, way too short but well written.

Dreams can come true if the husband and wife understand each other completely, and their love for each other make them be only one...

Was Lynn his wife?

It held may attention all the way through. You may have telegraphed the end a little early in the story but I looked forward to the conclusion all the more.

This is one of the reasons I return to LW. Thanks for keeping me coming back

Short, sweet, and to the point. Just like my you know what. How many stars is that worth?

as long as waking up isn't a nightmare. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very good short story. Well written and engaging. Looking forward to your future submissions

Happens on all my trips.

Dreams which cannot be differentiated from reality are unfulfilling! All events are possible and plausible; therefore inconsequential. I HATE movies where, at the end, they say ... "and then, I woke up!"

It does not bother me when dreams happen, but are clearly differentiated from the realities ... not so in this offering!

2*

no real commitment in this one

:-)

The story line is original. It was very well crafted.

In my mind it was intentionally crafted to look like paranormal stuff because a couple in certain situations can have telepathic connection with each other. In particular it can happen when an emotion like love or lust is so overwhelming that it transcends limitations of our conscious minds.

This story is fiction which implies the author is entitled to a degree of artistic freedom, particularly when he or she wants to depict extreme emotions &/or situations which overwhelm us.

I hope above makes sence.

Sweet dream. I enjoyed it.

:-)