All Comments on 'Lyon's Den Ch. 06'

Understand you want to get her into sexually explicit pictures, but you have chosen a weak plot device. She's going to sex it up, maybe whore it up, as a technique to maintain her relationship with Daniel? That's simply out of character, way out of character. Her personality type objects to the pictures themselves, not just who might see them. Too bad if you pursue this to the point of allowing her to degrade her self respect and personal identity. She will no longer be the character you have portrayed to this point.

Absolutely love the last line “...loaded for bare.” Brilliant!!😎

Well done. Depth. Substance. Real characters. Am really enjoying this.

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