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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Strange

Kind of strange tale. Couldn't really get into it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Different kind of story. You should have named him Cal.

Rose came out of left field and detracted from the story.

It's still a good story.

Keep writing .

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