by WatchingCloud
"High school boys, by and large, rubbed her the wrong way."
Rule #_, No touching which I think wood be very hard to do. Your story has many innuendos , did you get them from Andy ?
I'm hoping for more Denby-Lisa alone time rather than Lisa-Andy, but I trust where the author is taking us!
I love this story! I know that there are folks out there who can't focus on something longer than 1 - 3 pages, but... why do you need 20 of those for this story, when you could have one 20 or 2 ten page chapters?
Thanks for sharing.
I see a lot of comments about not getting to the point, or wishing for certain types of action. I appreciate that there's a story behind it, one that unfolds gradually and isn't just my personal fantasies one after the other. Some people seem to forget the first part of the name of the site.
I'm really enjoying the character development in this. Plus, I couldn't contain my chuckle when Lisa and Andy kissed, twisted turning sweet. Nice work.