All Comments on 'M Club Ch. 15'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome

Another excellent chapter! Hot as ever. I love the way things are becoming more complicated for the characters. It's so rare to get into a realistic headspace, and you do that consistently with your characters.

And even though Andy just had a great experience, I can't help but still feel a little bad for him over the Lisa/Den/Sean thing. Vida's obviously clearly attached, too, so Andy kind of is the odd man out at the moment. Can't wait to see where it's all heading!

ErrolBookErrolBookover 6 years ago
Great

Another very hot chapter! Love the way you're continuing to develop the characters, especially Andy. Vida's proving to be a fun addition to the group, too!

blackknight314blackknight314over 3 years ago

A very nice side to the story. Unexpected, but hot!

Thanks for sharing!

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