All Comments on 'Maataa's Duties'

Well written, interesting POV. Perhaps there could be more.

Biggest load of crap I have read in 10 years of Literotica.

Literotica should have a seperate Listing for garbage like this. Let's call it TOAD, Thoughts Of An Idiot.

Not bad. Needs some work but you certainly have a sensual nature and you are able to render it. More practice, please. Pay no attention to that moron's critical remarks. He is too stupid to appreciate your talents.

Ur just fucked up in the head and learn American English

This is a first story. Can we try some constructive feedback please. I see neither Rocky nor Sam has written a story, not even a first attempt. I encourage this author to continue to write and get better. Constructive criticism NOT the same as your personal attacks. Does writing discouraging rather than encouraging comments make you feel better about your worthless little life?

I can't imagine why I commented in such a crude way. I read the story again and I don't find it bad at all. My apology to the author for such an outright attack. It was wrong period.

And well done! The power dynamic was most erotic. Again, well done!

Ignore the couple of abusive comments. This was sensual, and much better written than most of the stories on this site.

Thank you to everyone who has taken the trouble to vote, given feedback, commented, and most importantly read my story.

Happy New Year!

i read the story i like the fact that you are using real terms. i have to say that it needs more of a sexual thing. i don't know to much about Indian culture or the way regular every day life people are. if this was a intro story make sure the next chapters give more details. good job to be the first time you write make sure chapter 2 gives more details and hope to read more about this family!!!

beautiful and finely-written tale. Thank you.

Your writing is very erotic and imaginative. Your Master must be very proud and pleased with your creativity. Awesome !!

And it was good to get Rocky's gracious apology. This is a fine story, of a mother's love for her boy's young penis and a son's reverence for that wonderful hairy hole he came out of. I trust that there are millions of boys in India paying tribute to their mother's vagina with their fat brown penis and blowing their heavy loaded brown balls up their own mommy's ever-loving cunt.

made me hot! I am from India, I like my mother. would like to write something on it

WHERE IS THE STORY? IF THAT IS WHAT THE MEN OF INDIA REQUIRES OF THEIR WIVES, AND THE MOTHER OF THEIR SONS, THEN I SEE WHY THE BRITISH NEEDS TO RETURN TO CONTROL OF THIS ARCHAIC LAND OF MEN WHO DRESS IN WESTERN CLOTHING, BUT FORCE THEIR WOMEN TO DRESS IN BED SHEETS. THIS IS ONE SORRY EXCUSE OF A STORY.

I enjoyed this story I can't wait for more