by Cliff11
In both interpretations of the phase. Quite an interesting read and good imaginative situations.
Well done and would like to read more.
Your stories are getting better and better (and I've enjoyed them all). Hope you keep writing! One thing you might want to do more of is describing the women in your stories. I think you can make them more interesting by telling us more about what they look like.
My god, this is really a good story and extremely well written, i enjoyed it a lot, as the plot and the words visualize like a movie when reading;
reading it caused me to get super-hot and excited...
bumbling along to the closure and rewards. TK U MLJ LV NV