All Comments on 'MacFarlane Investigates'

by Cliff11

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ThomRobinsonThomRobinsonabout 13 years ago
Keep it UP

In both interpretations of the phase. Quite an interesting read and good imaginative situations.

BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
An entertaining and very interesting short story....

Well done and would like to read more.

mememe621mememe621about 13 years ago
Great story!

Your stories are getting better and better (and I've enjoyed them all). Hope you keep writing! One thing you might want to do more of is describing the women in your stories. I think you can make them more interesting by telling us more about what they look like.

slave2womanslave2womanabout 13 years ago
reads like a movie

My god, this is really a good story and extremely well written, i enjoyed it a lot, as the plot and the words visualize like a movie when reading;

reading it caused me to get super-hot and excited...

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
JAMES TO THE RESCUE???!!!!

bumbling along to the closure and rewards. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
End the story then

Where is the end ?

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