All Comments on 'Mackenzie's Accident'

you must do a second or more continuing this to the next level

so much more here to explore in a relationship

I enjoyed your writing style. Please do write more. I'd love to see a sequel to this story.

I wish you would've said from the beginning that Mr. Hamilton waa black. I had been picturing a white guy in my head.

I try to put descriptions of people (especially the narrator) in the story somehow. I find it bland (if not strange) for someone to say, "I'm a six foot, bald, black man." But I can find a way to integrate descriptions in the story earlier for later works.

Great story. Well paced and patient. I liked how we didn’t learn that Hamilton was black until midway thru. Dangerous sex is only better with a little pee mixed in. 5 stars