All Comments on 'Maddie in Cancún Ch. 02'

by wolfbadger

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hope you get it that way

someday. can't see anything erotic here with such assholes as carachters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
W.T.F.

Is this supposed to be, erotic, nope, good, nope, original, nope, pointless, bingo. I'll skip the rest of your fantasy cause I can't stand any of the people in it. In a story to make it interesting you need to like someone, Maddie is a stupid little slut, Sam a complete dickhead and you made Will a short dicked weak little cuck, who cares?

RydersRydersalmost 12 years ago
hmmm

I think Will suspect sumthin,wonder if he like tha idea of her doin it with sumone else,i would luv 2 see if it did get thicker

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