by DieterSchaumer
One of the most original stories I've come across here. Congratulations. Hopefully more to come.
Thanks! I have something of a confession to make in that there already is a second part, on my blog at disguisedwriting.wordpress.com.
I posted this and other stories here as sort of an outpost, for people who like the kind of stuff I like but perhaps never knew that masking fiction existed or that they were into it.
I value commentary anywhere, of course, but most of my work gets posted to that main blog.
I liked what you wrote, and I also read part 2 on your site. I hope you continue to post here, I liked the direction the story was going in and would love to read more about Maddy's exploits.