All Comments on 'Made Up'

...A well done girls night in. Loved this part, on to the girls night out. Cheers! --- Josie

Realy good story hope you continue writing.

This isn't any better than the fat guy faggot story.

More deluded nonsense.

Liked the "daughter" part at the end. :-) Always imagined myself transitioning from son to "daughter" xxxx.

Wow, I would love to have a wonderful shemale for a play mate !!!! Wonderful story, thanks. .

I loved your story. I have had a fantasy of having a Momma like her for a long time. I would love to be her daughter.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Would love to experience something like this myself.