All Comments on 'Madelyn Ch. 02'

I know this chapter was very short, but rest assured, the next chapter is already submitted and it is a whopping (for me...LOL) THREE pages long!

As for future chapters, I'm working on them as fast as I can. I'm having to completely rework my chapters and am trying to make them longer while still keeping the integrity of the story intact.

i think your story is excellent and as long as you maintain the quality of the story the length is secondary . i very much enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to the next one

w/the previous commenter "donalde". It the quality over quantity thing. I would rather read a good story than a poor one, and if I have to wait that's okay. I get that I'm reading a story that is in the "process" of being written. Keep doing what you feel is right ...

Lovely writing, keep those chapters coming!!

look foward to more

I think one thing that sort of bothers me is they keep shifting but no mention of clothing being taken off or shredded is noted. I would think if they were shifting into the nude it would have caused some sort of reaction when the counsel changed in front of her.