All Comments on 'Madhu's Job'

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impo_58impo_58almost 10 years ago
Auuunhhh, ooommhhh, uuuhhhh.

All the comments this story deserve is: "Auuunhhh, ooommhhh, uuuhhhh"

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
from he old one

Please get someone to help with your English before you venture into print.

nixongnixongover 9 years ago

You screwed up the ending. It was a really good story. Of course your grammar is way off

2hot2m82hot2m8over 9 years ago
Hot

A Tight Twat Always Makes my Cock Swell! Came Hard!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
NICE Story

Very Nice story. i like it. there must be a second part of it with again forcing from prakash and resistance and finally submission from Madhu. and a forced anal also

chennaishobschennaishobsover 9 years ago
nice one

u made the reading interesting

chennaishobschennaishobsover 9 years ago
indeed so realistic

i truly felt as if prakash did me. so much emotions and action. keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good story! thanks!

more chapters please! Consider adding anal, daily sex at the office with her boss and possibly other employees (men and women), exhibitionism (her boss buys her see-through sari & underwear to wear at work and out in public),and sex-filled business trips. Madhu should get pregnant.

arch3rarch3rover 9 years ago
Very Erotic

Continue this if possible!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very hot story /so are you going to continue with it

Are their consequences? Please not another chuckhold story we get these all the time. Does she confess her affair to her husband and and ask for forgiveness. Does her boss blackmail her or does she continue until caught. Surely in India she must know what happen, can't happen again . Sure they must be payback? Divorce or two people coming could terms with what happened! I hope you work this story out . It easy to cheat it's harder to come to terms with your behavior

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
too hot to read

you rock go ahead and write some more on madhu's new found liberation

shang40shang40about 9 years ago
मधु एक नितंबराणी

तिच्या नितंब व उरोजांना दाबायला प्रकाशला मजा आली असणार. त्याचा विशाल लंड आणि योनी चुंबनाने ती सुखावली व मग सुरु झाला संभोगाचा सिलसिला.

पराग व माझ्या बायकोने अषीच सुरवात केली व आज दोन वर्षे ते एकमेकांना सुख संभोग सुख देत आहेत.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great story - please continue!

would love to read more chapters. Madhu, her boss, and 2 other employees (a man and a woman, married but not to each other) could go on a business trip. The women get drunk and group sex ensues with DPs for both women, the women do ass-to-mouth (their own asses and each other's ass), lesbian sex, and exhibitionism by both women.

You have multiple stories with similar themes, but this one is your best, by far.

SkyfalconSkyfalconalmost 9 years ago
More

Will you write more about these two

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Bloody horny story. Write more .

mitchawamitchawaalmost 6 years ago
Interesting story

It's obvious the author is a non-English speaker and is in need of a good editor.

The plot is traditional: beautiful woman, horny boss, missing husband, horny wife, wine and whisky, dancing, fondling, resistance lost, fucked. Dialogue awkward, internal dialogue intermixed in long paragraphs, lack of secondary characters, awkward phrasing. While it was an interesting story it would have been much better and shorter with a good editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
HOT, HOT, HOT!!!

Very erotic story. Great build up and descriptive action and thoughts. Not being a primary English speaker adds to the eroticism.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Coment

The comments are Better than the stor, but Shang40 is the only one who makes sense.

shang40shang40about 1 month ago

@ 26thNC

Thanks.

The character Madhu and also in other stories like Meghana are all Ms and those ladies are blessed with hot Sexy body features.

There is another name Manisha. We are brahmin. She is my cousin in late 20s. Married @ 26 but deprived in sex since her hubby was sent abroad for full one year. Manisha got a job and her boss, actually a Muslim Shehnaj Khan.

He supported her in work and in one of the company party became her dance partner.

Manisha being deprived in sex allowed him to come closer and kissed during dance.

That night nothing happened but on a company tour they explored further sex journey.

Though a brahmin got taste of Muslim cock which gave her more sexual satisfaction than her hubby.

The bed affair continued and Shehnaj got her younger virgin sister in law also.

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