All Comments on 'Magda & the Captain Ch. 01: Lightheaded'

even though this was alright, I just could not follow it, sorry I guess I am not into this kind of story

Really liked this. Not to often do I see sci-fi stories in this section. I hope I don't have to wait a year for chapter 2. Thanks.

So uniquely creative and beautiful! I particularly liked the last scene and the last line. Man! This story is so good. Thanks KCorvid for the good read

@Jenorma thank you for saying so, I actually find that feedback very valuable. This was not an easy chapter to write; I loved the idea of zero grav but actually making it happen, oof. I had a feeling it might be difficult to follow. That's what took me so long to post this after posting the Pilot episode last year. But now that I'm past it, there are more to come, and all the positive feedback has me encouraged to keep going!

Very well written KCorvid. You wrote it with such perfection it feels like I was pulled directly in to the story and imagined and felt the passion between the two characters. I hope more chapters will be written and published soon :).