All Comments on 'Magdalen Islands'

Love this story and the fantasy it draws on.... hopefully there will be another chapter.

Should have been good but spoiled by some basic mistakes. More than once you use semi-literate crap like

"Petru pulled out and lied down"

It's 'lay down', FFS.

And you more than once sometimes refer to 'he' and 'him' without being at all clear which of the two male characters you are referring to. Very confusing.

makes me crazy horny. Without any pre-planning, I ended up fucking my husband and his old college buddy throughout the night while anchored off Bolivar Peninsula in Texas. It just happened and it was glorious. We fucked for three days until we ran out of condoms for my new lover. Great story!

I love being the center of attention on an all day, or week long sail. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

brilliant terse narative style,

fabulous pacing,

deft characterization;

you my friend are

a consummate professional.

an honor to read,

favorited fully.

I've not gone sailing for a very long time (to much work!). With that said, I'd crew for Petru anytime!

Sexy story. Good job.

As to the grammatical error noted in a previous comment, well, in the end, it just doesn't matter. The essence of the story will suffer only if the reader allows it to.