All Comments on 'Maggie'

Take something easy. "Anniversary".

It actually means the annual repeat, or verse. Go look it up.

You write "her grandmothers one year anniversary"... what other kind of anniversary IS THERE????

Rather write "the first anniversary of her grandmother's passing", or similar.

"...she was stood in front..." - really? Is English your 3rd or 4th language?

Sorry, this kind of "English" is nauseating.

Pity I can't give you minus-5 stars...

HORRIBLE!

Everyone in her life dies, she gets dressed, she rides in a car, she acts as a dominatrix.

Pad that to the Lit. minimum of 750 words and this is what you get.

In an actual story there would be some kind of lead in or background to the following events instead of everything being isolated.

If you would leave your names I would reply but since you hide behind anonymity I shan't.

I don't see you publishing anything and I more than welcome criticism but it's pointless if it isn't helpful and destroys the writers passion to share.

It is people like you two anons that cause writers to stop sharing.

The Anons are A**Holes

I can't believe they had the audacity to leave such comments which are both BS. Stop being such WIMPS and say something real and stand up for it. Give SV a chance to actually reply!!