All Comments on 'Maggie and Her First Film'

I could not focus on your plot because of so many grammatical errors in your writing. Please take this as constructive advice and not as criticism. (i.e.; "young guys like older woman.") Woman is singular, women is plural.

There are many skilled editors on this site. Look them up and take their advice.

Better luck next time.

I thought your story was great and well written. I'm sure those of you who write your stories are not out for a pulitzer. It is just a story for entertainment we are not in English class.......lol

An excellent erotic story. Keep up the good work and ignore the negative comments from anonymous people who do not have enough intelligence to know that most stories posted on Literotica are fiction. Thanks again for posting this story.

Very arousing stuff. Enjoyed reading it.