All Comments on 'Maggie's Gift'

by Scorpius1945

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nightjacknightjackover 5 years ago
Beautiful

I loved the sensitivity with which this story was told. Beautiful, yet equally heartbreaking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very Good

Very detailed story expressing a lot of warmth and family love. The only thing I cant get my head around is that having been an orderly in a hospital and seeing a lot of the elderly, grey haired and withered skin and wrinkles, with hanging boobs and old wrinkly cocks, to be physically naked with an elder like that, just couldn't see myself in that situation. But that's just a personal opinion.

As I said, good story with plenty of emotion and heart. Well done.

Scorpius1945Scorpius1945over 5 years agoAuthor
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I agree, many men in their later years are withered, saggy and totally non-erotic. However, the end of life doesn't need to be like that. There are plenty of strong, fit and healthy elderly men who would be quite capable of making love to young women. You have a selected sample of the elderly in a hospital situation. S

MstChiefMstChiefover 5 years ago
Thank you

This has been one of the best stories I have read in a very long time.

irishdwolf1irishdwolf1about 5 years ago
Amazing

One of your best stories absolutely loved it...you have a gift!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A love story that actually makes that seems so real. Thank you for a beautiful story.

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