All Comments on 'Magic'

A great story of magical romantic bliss. I especially liked the mention of both of them meeting and wearing wedding bands, giving the impression that they're about to commit adultery, only to find out later on that they're actually married to each other. Nice touch!

You've written a perfect little love story; a married couple still deeply in love and lust with each other.

There's nothing more to write about these two that wouldn't border upon voyeurism.

Certainly not the first time this scenario has been written about but this was undoubtedly a good one. The husband was right about one thing and that is that you can give me a forty-something woman in reasonably good shape over a twenty-something hard-bodied girl any day of the week.

Cool story, I was thinking it was another woman all along.