All Comments on 'Magic Girls Ch. 04'

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DOOMGHOST over 14 years ago

NICE

NICE WRITING

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Feels rushed.

Nice - I especially like how Cindy is coming to understand her powers. But your grammar is not as good as in the previous chapters, as if you were in a hurry to get this posted. That is a pity, because it makes the story harder to read. Keep up the good work!

Anonymousover 14 years ago

HURRY UP AND BRING US MORE

We are drowning in werewolf and Samuelx stories.

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I now go by Jasmine VanCroft. I no longer post on Literotica.com as I run my own website full of stories and 3D artwork. I have written well over 2 MILLION words of erotica. I have left Literotica in the dust.

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