All Comments on 'Magic Lamp'

An interesting story well told and very well written, keep up your good work.

Coming from an ancient artifact

Great story. It was fun watching their self discovery. Their individual awakening.

Another great story and worthy of five stars. My only complaint is that it ended too soon and almost had a rushed feeling about the last few paragraphs.

A nice story from a nice person. I enjoyed the pace, a meaningless life changed by a bit of light shining into the darkness. Many thanks for all the gifts you share...and may magic be with us all!

I often go through "new stories" searching for treasures.

When I see the name of Ogg the king of Bashan or some of my other favorite writers my metal detector buzzes and I know that I am in for a pleasant time.

Thank you Ogg for sharing your storytelling gift with us

Nicely put together story about nice people, apparently sparked off by a magic lamp. This is a win-win story for all involved, including fulfilling the wishes of the lucky readers.

If this story has involved a genie. Instead we have an crescent tale.

Should read excellent tale.

Very enjoyable short story. That must have been one very, very nasty house to live in.

good story. I like it!

I do agree with one of the earlier comments. After the detail of most of the story, the ending seemed rushed. Not only the last few paragraphs, at that. Nonetheless, one of the better stories I've found on this site. Actual romance, too!

Whenever I see a new story by oggbashan, I read it. I do like some more than others, but I know my time won't be wasted, and I'll have a satisfied smile on my face by the end.

It may not have been a "real" magic lamp, but it certainly did bring magic to the lives of Peter, Margaret, and Ian. I did wonder, at first, if the romance would be with Penelope, but it quickly became clear that Margaret was the lucky lady.

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Such a sweet story. Really.

What's it doing on a porn site! HA

What a wonderful love story. I could just die laughing as he found out that the darned thing wasn't real at all. But some things don't have to be real to give you magic. Sometimes it's the people you rarely notice that are hiding the best magic of all. Finally Peter and Margaret have their love story! Please keep writing, I loved it!!