All Comments on 'Magical Battle'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very creative

Combines hentai themes very well. Keep working on making your scenes more erotic , gave you 5 stars for now

JJTEE2010JJTEE2010almost 14 years ago
:)

Very very creative! Almost reads like a film! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
quite enjoyable

Very good story. The only thing I would say to work on is proofreading. Noticed a few spelling errors, but mostly just forgotten letters. I do that all the time :3 Other than that very minor complaint (honestly, it was easily overlooked), the story was brilliant. Good blend of themes, and it is so hard to find a multi-cock story; in this case, it was even futa! Keep up the great work <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Magnifico

Absolutely amazing, I'll just add this to my rereads...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent

Ill have to favorite this story. Sequel?

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