All Comments on 'Magical Essence Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Openers

I love how you set up your stories and I think I'll be coming back looking for new episodes very often. Keep up the good work

JDsellerJDsellerover 18 years ago
Like this story as well as your others!

I hope that you keep the stories coming. They are very entertaining. Plus creative.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I love it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome

Just needs a little more editing, but you have a great story here!!! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A Fun story

I hope to see more from this series. This is the second 'Serious' Story I have read on here and It has certainly made a good impression on me. I can't wait for the rest and keep doing what you are doing. Not too much of the sexual stuff but just enough to keep it interesting and the reader on the edge of their seat constantly.

sissiboosissibooabout 7 years ago
Improper use of Smirk

smirk

smərk/

verb

verb: smirk; 3rd person present: smirks; past tense: smirked; past participle: smirked; gerund or present participle: smirking

1.

smile in an irritatingly smug, conceited, or silly way.

"he smirked in triumph"

synonyms: smile smugly, simper, snicker, snigger; leer

"I hate the way they just sit there smirking"

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