All Comments on 'Magnolia's Lover'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Beautifully written, and very erotic. Could there be a next chapter in what appears to be the start of a saga?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nicely done...

....but one small error in locale. One Page 1 she met Danny in ATL and later in the story it was Memphis. Aside from that, excellent work.

silent_submissive114silent_submissive114over 8 years ago
more please

Please tell me there's another chapter or 2 hehe loved it, so well written ^.^

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Still a good premise

But too much pain for my taste.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very cinematic...the mood, vivid descriptions of Miss Maggie's home and bedroom. Her lilting Southern drawl that can turn as quickly as the crack of her whip. I'd live to read more as Kara becomes Magnolia's protege, or one of her, girls?

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