All Comments on 'Maid up for Halloween'

Thank you for sharing it with us - five stars.

Didn't quite care for it as much as your Trista stories. I think the latter worked better because Trista rayed in the bounds of the agreement...his unwilling biput voluntary acceptance gave them a thrill. Here, she's using some blackmail to achieve her ends, which makes it a bit more tawdry. Would have preferred her to keep her stick by the agreement that the pictures were private and trade upon jus enjoyment of the evening rather than threatening him with a new set.

Typing on phone for that last comment...ignore the typos please.

This was a great story which the wife and I really enjoyed. Thanks for posting it.

Sure wish he could get her back though. It's a bit obvious she doesn't care about his feelings at all and that shit coulda gotten way outta hand. But it's a fantasy so I guess it doesn't really matter if it's realistic or not.

I loved this story! Definately a fun fantasy!

Offer to send her down the road. You want a woman that's happy to abuse you? Doesn't seem like a good idea to me. Doesn't sound like much of a loving wife.

Maybe it's time for you to come clean with your desires. You read 2 amberbmaid stories in one day and dis them both. Why bother reading a second?

Great story, thank you! I hope you please continue this story!

Take the pictures away from her and just say no. The rest is baloney.

no way in hell I would let that happen.

I think he threw the costume away. And when she tried to blackmail him with the pictures he asked for them back. She either gave them to her or she got divorced. A simple choice. Why would any man stay with a woman that is trying to hurt and humiliate him? No one would. She'd be lucky if she didn't land in the hospital if she didn't give him all the pictures. He could have called the Police and had her arrested for abuse that night. A much better ending than this trash. No stars for absolute implausible drivel.

Dickwad.

Because he divorced her. The only question was whether or not he sent her to jail for assault, battery and spousal abuse. Epically stupid story. Justine would be lucky if he didn't send her to the hospital when he took the pictures away from her.

1 star

If you don't like it, don't continue reading. These are STORIES.

It is a good story, but too far, for no preamble. No one has any idea how these people are thinking or relating, so there is no real reference for a reaction, other than the obvious. Perhaps they tried this all along and was the next step in his fantasy, but the reader doesn't know it. As written, I would have gone along as far as the threat, then it would be over, but that's me.

By the end of the story they have no idea how many diseases they have, or how long they have to live. Even as a fantasy there has been some serious thought processes left out of the equation here.

I would only receive a visitor at the door and then that would have been it. And in my opinion there is only one answer for the blackmail allegations of the woman with the photos: Throw the whore out of your house and your life! Basta!

And if some believe that this is a game or a story or a fantasy, then I answer you: Anyone who writes something like this dreams of it, and you always have to give the right answer to such confused spirits!

His agreement was the costume not to actually be the maid. Her trying to both blackmail him and treat him like a maid in front of others was not part of their agreement.

Why do these stories get written this way? It may turn on some people, but it’s just lazy ideas and writing to me. A wife blackmailing her husband with photos is old and easy. Also, a wife that will blackmail her husband with photos he didn’t agree to take does not love him. A wife that would allow strangers to harm him, does not love him. Yeah it’s a story and it was kinda hot, but it could have been much better and more erotic.

And, in the next few weeks after Halloween, the husband takes nude photos of the wife while sleeping or in the shower negating her photos of him…what’s good for the goose is good for the gander and hats why good writing is important.

However, there were parts that were hot, so let me ramble, but still give the story a read.

First thing the next day, he visits his lawyer to start divorce proceedings.

Who needs a bitch of a wife like that.