All Comments on 'Mail Call'

Great work. Well put together and easy to follow

okay so in the end i enjoyed this story. it was a little long in the tooth in the beginning, but in the end you really appreciate the lengthy set up. Will be nice to read what happens next.

rb21

the build up had me nearly over the edge. I don,t know if it was just me but the only thing i found wrong with this story is that i had the ending figured out a little sooner than i would have liked. definetly keep going.

why do arseholes like art martin continue to write here, ART MARTIN YOUR A FUCKING ARSEHOLE AND YOUR STORIES ARE SHIT, you made randy come off as a SERIAL RAPIST OF HIS COUSIN AND EVEN DAWN AT THE END EVEN THO SHE WAS SCREAMIN WITH HIM 2 STOP but he wouldnt because just like a typical "STUPID AMERICAN CUNT" who comes out the army a "BIGGER CUNT THAN ANYONE IN THIS WORLD" you because your a guy simply reckons women love being dominated to the point of rape, NOT ALL WOMEN ENJOY THIS and all your fucking shit stories are all the same, a weak minded girl who comes off like a victim who's been RAPED by a CONTROL FREAK ARSEHOLE OF A FAMILY MEMBER and in the end she likes it cause GUYS and MEN LIKE YOU, YA FUCKING TWAT think that things ok

god your a grade a cunt!

Gee, I guess you didn't like the story.

Very creative use of the letters as an introduction to the story to give background and the ending was totally unexpected, although it may not have been ethically great—as that one guy exclaimed—it was nonetheless very well done and creative.

This story would an interesting one to Follow and see what's Next.

Lousy story, hate the format, good grief.......... this is like you are in kindergarten, the story does not flow well. too herky jerky and then it doesn't even make sense inthe end..........