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As I get feedback by email asking sequel to the story here is explanation. I wrote 2 more Mail girls stories, but they have different main characters. The reason why they aren't published is that they need to be revision by fluent english speaker/writer. I looking for editors in Volunteer program. That way I finded editor for 1st story, that way I finded editor for 2nd story, which will be edited in few days and then published. I hope that I will find editor for my 3rd story as well. After 3rd story, where I will again introduce 2 mail girls, I have in mind sequel to 3rd story as it is too long (for me, it's best if it is less than 3 pages long per erotic story- about 8 to 10 pages in word) and then go back to previous heroines, so readers get update about them. As I'm not good in english, in this explanation is probably few mistakes as well. If you want to help me with editing for publishing, please contact me, that way you can help me to improve my writing skills and get an exclusive sneak peek about new stories :D