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HypoxiaHypoxiaover 8 years agoAuthor
Author's Comment:

This is my verse from which MAKE ME SCREAM! derives:

So beautiful and so rich

And such a demanding bitch

She holds a group audition

A fuck-a-thon with many men

She will only wed the man

Who makes her scream his name

And if another screams his name

She'll make him scream in pain

What fool would take that wager?

He might as well just rape her

TropiloverTropiloveralmost 7 years ago
Very good one

I،'m still laughing. Good one. Loved it.

yukonnightsyukonnightsover 5 years ago
Great Imagination

I really enjoyed this. Really very creative and unique!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Ipswich ?

A very entertaining tale, rather like a well-told joke.

One very minor thing. The town does not have a 't' in its name:

See here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ipswich

73

HP

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