All Comments on 'Make Me Yours: BoyxBoy - Act 02'

Really enjoyed chapter 2, can't wait for your next update!

These 2 chapters are incredible. .cant wait to read..feel an enjoy #3.. the way of your writing makes us..the readers... truely feel..everything these 2 great characters are going thru... Expectantly waiting.....

Could you please do longer chapters, though? They don't have to be all full of sex, as long as the plot and execution are good, which yours are, longer chapters will be interesting and will get you high ratings.

Loved both chapters. Brayden is one sexy and masculine muscular guy. I imagine him with a bit of blonde chest hair between the pecs -- just enough to tantalize Riley! That would be a great sight!

Like the way you write...draws me in to the action as if I was there. (make it even better by proofreading some more).