All Comments on 'Make Me Yours: BoyxBoy - Act 03'

Your writing is fantastic! The sex scenes are hot, but I am living for these two characters already. The chapters are a bit short, but you’ve managed to pack a heated punch into each one so far. Wouldn’t hurt if they were longer or a bit more frequent. Regardless, I’ll defintely keep reading if you keep writing (:

Your writing is as compelling as Brayden. I love this story.

Have enjoyed this story series you have started. More, please. I’m just a little concerned about the jealousy/possession thing a bit. Don’t want to see darkness in this story. Maybe a life learning situation, just not darkness. Bring it on! Thanks.

As good as this story is... What right does this guy Brayden have to call all of the shots, and make all of the decisions? He has literally steamrolled right over Riley. It feels dangerous to me. I can see this turning very dark and violent in a hurry if someone else were to touch Riley. What about Riley having to sit and watch Brayden touch and dance with these 4 girls? Its a HUGE double standard. Riley needs to start having a say in what is going on with this new relationship... he needs to grow some balls, his insecurities are giving Brayden complete power and dominance over everything. Its not healthy!!!!

I think the dominance is so hot. Like christian grey who calls all the shots and gets jealous so easily. Jealousy is probably the hottest trait someone can have because along with it is overprotection and love. I think adding another guy who has a crush on Riley would really bring that out in Brayden. That would make him mad and it would be a good transition to coming out because he would want everyone to know about their relationship. Instead of just an innocent crush maybe he could start some beef with Brayden. I love your writing keep it up

“What about Riley having to sit and watch Brayden touch and dance with these 4 girls? Its a HUGE double standard. Riley needs to start having a say in what is going on with this new relationship...”

EXACTLY. Brayden’s possessiveness is selfish and one-sided. If Riley belongs to him, doesn’t he belong to Riley?

There is no double standard in this story. The author made it clear that Riley was not the jealous type. He stated it himself. Just because one character is, the other doesn't have to be. To state otherwise is idiotic. That's not the way real life works either. Riley did have a say in what happened. Brayden's reaction not only pleased him, but it turned him on. It was clearly written to show that. If you don't like possessive stories then whatever but don't try and say its written one way when it wasn't. I liked your story. Keep writing!

I'm fairly stalking this site hoping for an update. I check several times a day. Please don't make us wait too much longer.

Good read! I will follow as long as the two mature, and stay with mutual respect and love.

Looking forward to more of Braden and Riley