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All Comments on 'Make Myself a Sandwich'

by Stonedancer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too short. This is not a story.

As above.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not Only Too Short...

...but this style of "first person removed" writing is annoying as hell - and seems to be becoming the fall-back style for Lit "writers" who can't write.

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