All Comments on 'Make This Last Forever Pt. 01'

Are you still planning on continuing Cassandra's story from your Invasion of the Pussy Snatchers series? The story, which involves the seduction of straight women, are always a pleasure to read and I look forward to seeing more of it in the future.

Thanks.

This story has so much potential, but it leaves me wonder how Dani might get revenge on those bitches if she ever wants it that is. Maybe after she fixes the relationship between Sam and Ashley, she might find a way to blackmail them into becoming sex slaves for them. She could somehow uncover some sort of scandal that one or all of those girls took part in, find out some sort of infedelity that Linsey was a part of, or better yet she discovers the infedelity plus the questioning of if Linseys child is actually her husbands. Truthfully, I excpect that what ever you plan to do, it will be amazing. Can't wait

So "Remember This Moment Forever" is still my favorite lesbian seduction story of all time, and so when I saw there was now a sequel, I was both elated and nervous - how could it ever top the first one? But what I like about this is that it takes a great character in a new direction. While I could have happily read about Dani's seducing of other women for days, the revenge angle is an interesting one as well. I trust the author will find a way for Dani to get her proper vengeance, and I can't wait to read all about it.

You are such a great writer and i can't wait for the next chapter and the two after that. I hope she gets revenge on the bitches that did that to her. I felt so bad for her.

I'm really torn regarding this story.

I have to say that I really liked "Remember this moment forever" and part of it was due to the whole idea of a young straight/slightly bi-curious girl being drawn into lesbianism.

As a lesbian woman, those are my favorite types of story. Sadly, I find this new one to be lacking in this theme. Probably my fault for having wrong expectations. :-P

Still good writing though.

I had hoped for more straight girls being led to lesbianism for this continuation. (From an author with the name Gaytripper after all...)

It looks like Dani's experiences might have curbed her lesbian enthusiasm. She seems to have become too restrained and accomodating.

I think Dani has started rationalizing stuff too much. She didn't know she was a lesbian until she tried, and now she should help some unsuspecting young adults and woman to take the plunge.

I've been on a rollercoaster of revenge and emotions in this story. I went from thinking these bitches would have to die, to holding them at gunpoint, deleting the evidence while making them do each other and filming it, to just stunned amazement Dani is still standing. This is literally good for (the) character and good for us readers. Moreover, I like the spin on Dani's greatest humiliation to it now being a source of gender loving affirmation to a sort of educational/self-awareness video. This character has been to hell and back. I hope there is a little slice of heaven waiting for her

Now this was a great story!

Thank you for sharing this with us.