All Comments on 'Make This Last Forever Pt. 03'

Yeah, it sucks that Dani left the women she converted, but she didn't have to. Personally I don't enjoy getting a whole lot of preaching while enjoying fantasies of turning straight girls.

I can't imagine who whould.

I understand writing a first chapter with a depressing tone. If it picks up after. But three? The eroticism of the seductions is now way too overshadowed by the main character's misadventures and own self pitying.

Are we terrible people for enjoying the first story? Is that what the author is trying to tell us? I liked the well-made and drawn out seduction of Dani in Remember This moment Forever (and admitedly the unrepentant depravity), and this sequel keeps on shitting all over us for it.

I do agree that these stories have very little erotic value due to the way the characters act, I still think that this is a beautiful and well written story about a very strong character who has survived so much trauma in life, who will soon (hopefully) find true love

I'm having trouble finding out who this story is made for.

I actually enjoy the flashback scenes more because at least in those Dani is showing some initiative and going for what she wants. Present-day Dani is just insufferable.

Please don't listen to them. Some stories just aren't meant for everybody. If they really didn't like it, they could've just stopped reading and found what they were looking for instead of trying to bring you down. This story was written beautifully and I can't wait for the next installment. You've been putting me on the tips of my toes this whole time, finally, you have to execute and I'm sure it will be nothing less than amazing.

I agree that Dani in her "sex addiction" phase is much more interesting to follow than today. I loved the scene about Kathleen and her conversion. I wish there was more of the kind.

A shame that Dani got too crazy with the drugs (one needs to know when to show restraint, to fully enjoy the times of excess in life), and became this guilt ridden being instead of the free woman she had the potential to become.

While I enjoy this story from an "objective" point of view and hope to see its final chapter, I hope the author will continue the invasion of the Pussy Snatchers series which scratches soooo many of my itches.

I think this is the best chapter of the three. If only because we finally got to know where the big shift in Dany’s character came from.

The Dany at the beginning of the flasbacks is the one we left in Remember this Moment Forever. One who wasn’t afraid and was enthusiastic about her lesbian identity (and about sharing her discovery). It’s great to finally see her again.

I think that one of the reason some of the comments sound so angry is that we finally get to see Dani adventuring and seducing, but at the same time that aspect of her personnality is being brought down and destroyed in front of our eyes. Most people here don’t see any problem with being « a pussy whore. a cuntlicker. or an anal slut », or with converting girls either straight or with repressed lesbian inclinations (they’re better off this way than with the alternative of a lifetime of uncaring, 10-minutes-long-max, straight sex). So seeing Dany being punished and hating herself for it, just looks like clear condamnation from the author.

Anyway, I think that the story is still a worthwhile read. Not the continution I dreamed of, or that most people would have expected, but it is still an interesting novel with some very erotic moments and the usual quality of Gaytripper’s work. So my thanks to her.

A song that could describe this part is the recently-released "Look What You Made Me Do" by...Taylor Swift (aka Ashley's guilty pleasure)...

I wouldn't mind a side story where we follow the Kathleen character, and what happened to her after she met Dani.

great novel!! i love ugly old lesbian molest beauty!!!

if dani become slave of old fat professor,

it will be perfect