All Comments on 'Making a Whore Pt. 02'

by dna27fog

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rodryder44rodryder44over 6 years ago
Whore

Love the dialog but hated the recap at the beginning. Character description is nice. Proof reading is needed as the typing errors interfere with the story flow. One page chapters fits well so far.

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