All Comments on 'Making a Woman of Him Ch. 04'

by ElRoylk

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I hope that the one other thing

Was either to shoot himself or foregoing that, shoot her. You couldn't have made this any worse if you had TRIED to make it bad. Illogical, implausible actions abound. Even for fiction this was unbelievable tripe.

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