by prelate
An interesting way to balance the budget. I liked the story it was well written and the characters, Susan and Tom especially, were well rounded. The settings were clearly described, and the dialogue was believable.
My personal problems are the fact that Tom didn't react differently when Chuck replaced him, and the number of ropes of cum produced were way beyond believability. I understand this is fiction, but these last two items were over drawn.
It's a little difficult to complain about another guy fucking your wife when your own cock is in another woman's mouth.
4 Stars, nicely done, the $3000 just whet their appetites, I can see this easily running for three or four stories, plus the hook-up with their neighbor/actors and filming a foursome.