All Comments on 'Making Ends Meet'

I want it to begin. . Can't wait for the next chapter. .. Love it. . . Give me more....I can feel my juices coming out.

VERY good. kinda of Niche-ish but very well done within that niche. decent characters, would like a little more description during the sex personally and maybe a little more backstory on the 2 women but its very HOT overall

Thanks for all the votes and those who commented so far. I really like to hear back from people who enjoy something I decide to share. I would really appreciate knowing what you all think so I may improve myself. What you like, dislike, those things. Unfortunately I had a review earlier which I had to remove just on principle, so please if you dislike something don't be belligerent, people do try and it's entirely uncalled for to act in that manner (especially if you decide to hide behind Anonymous). Otherwise hit me with your best shot!

Become a bitter alcoholic and single-handedly wipe out the Italian mob (Becoming a female Max Payne)?

I really enjoyed this story, I'm anticipating reading the next chapter!

Brilliant story!

Of course you realize you've teased us with what is to come?

Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination with us.

So hot. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for the depravity to really begin🔥