All Comments on 'Making Friends With An Old Nemesis'

Please continue!

This story is awesome!

Take your time telling the story- did you have a bus to catch or something prior to posting this? As a straight stroke story , this is dandy but it coulda/woulda/shoulda been more then that. the best advice for strippers is 1) reach for your buttons 2) look the audience in the eye 3) act like you got all day!

That's not really my writing story, to be honest. I could drag out stories, but it's just not my kind of thing. I'll definitely keep in mind your suggestions for future though. But yeah, I like to keep things simple! ;D

Write more! I like a good story about a thick girl...

proof-reader!

Too many spelling and grammatical errors!

I assure you, I use a proof-reader. I'm Canadian. The spelling and grammar is correct as to the use of language in my place of birth. Cheers.

I think it was a very good story but felt like you rushed through it

Yep. Definitely continue it.

MAKE ANOTHER ONE THAT WAS GREAT

Great story! You must return and make a sequel! Can't leave us hanging like this!

Great stuff!

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