All Comments on 'Making Good On A Fantasy'

Congradulations on your first story. It built slowly to a delicious climax, and sounded very real. Keep writing. BTW, great picture. You can be righteously proud of your pretty pussy.

loved the story and for those who dont believe that a young woman can write, you do have to read this. Sometimes younger girls do know what to do. Like the other public note says damn, definetly be pround of your firm tits and cute tight pussy Larry

teri darlin, You have done a fabulous job with this story!! Damn what I wouldn't give for a student like that !!!! That build up was perfect and the ending was the perfect climax to such a wonderful story!!!

Please contribute more to this site. I loved this story and I can't wait to hear what else you have to offer.

Five 100s in a row, and rightly so!

If they're being honest . . . that was every male teacher's fantasy! And apparently, quite a few school girls' fantasy, too. As usual, your description of the sex was amazing. However, the picture you painted of the grungy bachelor apartment was priceless! Most of us guys have lived in one like that at one time or another. Unfortunatly, most of us didn't get a surprise visit like Mr. Marcone did.

Mmmmm!!! Fucking HOT story! Made my cock cum very quickly. The words "lolita", "teen", "tiny pussy" etc. turn me on, always.